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发表于 2019-6-11 12:42
【环球雅思】让我们都为猛龙打Call!北境之王,距离登基只差一步!
想必所有在加拿大的小伙伴们最近已经被我龙冲击总冠军的势头给点燃了。

这几天多伦多市区的景象是这样的:

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多伦多猛龙打破历史,闯进了NBA总决赛,现在势如破竹,整个城市乃至整个国家所有的人都众志成城表现出空前的团结。虽然总比分被扳成了3:2,但是猛龙队的人员整齐,士气也并没有减弱,距离总冠军真的只是一步之遥。

Nick 作为球迷,也作为雅思写作老师,有一个问题一直在他脑海里萦绕:


一支优秀的球队可以让一个社会变得更好吗?


不要觉得这个问题没有意义,事实上在加拿大这样一个多文化多种族多宗教信仰的社会里,各种矛盾和隔阂还是不少的。
今天这期推送,我们铁杆球迷Nick老师就要用雅思写作的手法来解释,为什么一支球队可以对社会产生如此积极的影响。

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体育运动能改变人的生活习惯和健康质量,这早已经不是秘密了。然而从最近发酵的“多伦多狂热”看来,运动能给一个社会带来的福音远不止强身健体这么简单。

看着越来越多的人走上街头,身着猛龙的球衣,为每一个进球摇旗呐喊,我发自内心的感觉到消除人心之间的隔阂并让社会变得和谐,也许仅仅需要一只球队。

Sport has the power to uplift the health and life quality of individuals, which is no longer a secret. Yet, given the consideration of the “Toronto Fever” rising tremendously in recent days, it is expected to be more than just encouraging people to have stronger bodies.

Seeing more and more people wearing the Raptor jerseys gathering in the streets and cheering for every shot being made, it is unfair to hold back the real thought within the deep of my heart: maybe all we need to eliminate all the disputes so to make a harmonious society is a basketball team.


现在很多国家的内部分歧主要在于宗教信仰的不同,而在当地拥有一支让所有人共同支持的球队可以极大的缓解这些争端。由于历史遗留问题,不同族裔的人会根据自己祖先的智慧和训导来坚持自己固有的行为方式,这也难免会和别的族裔发生冲突,比如饮食习惯,对待不同性别的态度等等。

The major cause of the inner schism in many countries is the disparity of multiple religions, which yet can be effectively relieved by possessing a basketball team for everyone to support in their local regions. Due to the historical issues, people inheriting their own ancestors’ wisdom and commandments would act differently to one and another, which provokes the inevitable conflicts including the contentious diet styles and attitudes towards sexes, etc.

However, a team for winning the championship could let them put those fights aside simply because the team spirit, the efforts for surviving and the thirst for victory are the deepest instincts of a human being—older than any of the religions in the world. That is also the reason why people in different skin colors and religions can stand together in Toronto downtown and burst into jubilate for every 3 pointers, every clutch rebound and every solid defense of 24 seconds. That is the moment that we do not tell a difference between each other because we can embrace those disparities for the same joy.

然而,一支为了争夺冠军而努力篮球队可以让他们放下隔阂,因为他们的团结,拼搏和对胜利的渴望是人类最原始的共鸣。这也就是为什么在多伦多街头上,不同肤色不同宗教的人会同时为每一次3分入筐,每个价值连城的篮板,每次24秒的严防死守共同发出呐喊。那一刻,我们不分彼此,那一场场胜利代表着我们可以因为共同的喜悦而接纳彼此的不同。

除了给一个国家民众提升情感层面,一支冠军球队同时也会给当地经济带来肉眼可见的繁荣。冷静下来观看那些为胜利而疯狂庆祝的人群,你不难发现有着大量的商品被设计,生产,销售且推广,而这些商品意味着更多人的可以因此而找到工作,提高收入,甚至开创自己的事业。

我们以钥匙链为例,这个看似和运动毫无关联的商品在多伦多猛龙赢下东部冠军的当日销售量激增直至脱销,仅仅因为上面有着球队的商标。

Apart from the inspiration provided for a nation, a team for championship also is the catalyst for the substantial prosperity in local areas. If we can calmly focus on the crazy crowds in celebration, it is not difficult to spot massive commodities being designed, produced, sold and promoted, which usually means higher employment rate, the uprise of income or even new business being born.

Let’s take those key chains for an example, no matter how non-relevant it seems to the sports industry, the sales record was easily broken on the very day that the Raptors won the champion of the eastern conference—because the key chains have the team logo on them.

如果我们把视野缩小到家庭单位,这只球队可以让不同年龄的家庭成员之间有更多的话题,从而促进他们的沟通。父母和孩子的关系由于年龄差异和在生长时社会构成的不同而普遍有着代沟,这也极大的威胁到了家庭的正常沟通。

但是,有了这只共同喜爱的球队,大家可以就现在进行的比赛和球星彼此分享意见和增进彼此的了解。这不仅仅是给家庭创造了一个可以坐在彼此身边享受娱乐的机会,更是给年轻的孩子创造了一个与父母平等对话的平台。

If we let the vision be narrowed down to the unit of the family, still, this team can do good for improving the family relationship by providing more common topics. Limited by their own specific ages and the social structures during the growths, most children and parents are suffering from the generation gaps, which is also jeopardizing the normal communication in their families.

With a beloved team, however, they can share feelings and ideas by watching the games. It is not only creating an opportunity for them to sit together and enjoy the entertainment, but also to build up a platform for the youngsters to equally talk to their parents.

不仅是家庭活动可以得到扩展,我们每个人也会因为这支优秀的球队而变成更好的人,为社会更负责的人。我们无法得知自己无意间看到或经历的事情给我们的未来产生怎样深远的影响,但有一件事情是肯定的:看着别人为梦想努力拼搏并最后收获胜利,我们也会相信天道酬勤而不断进取。

也许每一次为球队的胜利狂欢过后我们还是会回到平静的生活中,但那份感动会长存并默默的影响着我们的每个行动。

Like family activities being enriched, we will also become better ones to be responsible for the society because of this team. Surely, we will never unveil how the universe figures our destinies out by randomly giving us something to watch or experience, yet we know one thing for sure: seeing others harvest the victory by paying efforts will make us believe that “God helps those who help themselves” and lead us to the similar path.

Most of us are likely to return to our peaceful lives after the celebration for a basketball game victory, while that touched string will vibrate in every behavior of ours ever since.

当然,我们也许不能光指望篮球来拯救世界,因为毕竟这个世界上有太多其他更复杂的争议,但仅凭分析社会,家庭和个人这几个层面,我们已经不难看出一个球队对与一个城市乃至国家可以起到多么巨大的作用。

We certainly cannot expect the world to be completely saved by the game of basketball because there are too many other complicated issues after all. But according to the analysis on the aspect of society, family and individuals, we can obviously see what an indispensable role a sports team can play for a city or even a country.

最后,环球雅思所有成员都借这个机会大喊一声:
猛龙总冠军!

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